Those meddling kids.

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Shiori: We've been on his ass trying to get him to do that for months!
Lydia: I find that honey is more effective. I surmise that your parents are
vinegar people; am I right?

A trail of eyeballs? That's a lot of blind people.

Or twice as many half blind people.

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"Why do you smoke? How can you do that to yourself?"
"I do it because I'm too scared to use a gun."

The trail doesn't just consist of eyenballs you IDIOT!

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Flabbadacious!

A nose, too?

A nose or two?

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"Why do you smoke? How can you do that to yourself?"
"I do it because I'm too scared to use a gun."

That's actually really awesome.

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That's what she said

The clean lines of the female figure are great, particularly around the shoulders/torso area. I think if the hair and face of the guy were simplified a bit (more like the female) to use line more economically the image as a whole would read faster, though. Additionally, flat localised colour works really well as a style but sometimes one colour that doesn't quite fit in with the rest can throw it off a little. For example my eye keeps getting drawn back to the flaming torch and distracted by the primary red and yellow. Perhaps if these colours were toned down to be slightly muted similarly to the clothing and skin of the characters it wouldn't stick out so much.

/advanced critique

I love drawing eyeballs :3

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That was AWESOME!

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Flabbadacious!

Wonderful XD

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« Drive my dead thoughts over the universe
Like withered leaves to quicken a new birth,
And, by the incantation of this verse,
Scatter, as from an unextinguished heart
Ashes and sparks, my works among mankind! »